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0 posted 2008-11-15 09:52 PM


my heart is yours Pictures, Images and Photos
Well here we are again.
Me staring out the window with you on my mind.
This seems to be routinely now.
How much comfort in you I find.

Days will pass without me thinking,
About anything else but you.
You've had me completely hooked,
Since you gave me that first look.

My heart seems to grow wings and fly
Every time you give me that one smile.
But inside this feeling is growing.
And my heart is healing all the while.

There used to be a huge hole,
filled with pain and regret.
But now its emptied just for you,
Now will you come and fill it?

My heart is opened up.
it seems all to simple for you to do.
But only if you could read minds.
You'd know how much I care for you.

All those minutes used
for deep conversations
made me think that not only
do I care...but I love you too.

So this is love huh?
I always dreamed of this feeling and now I know.
That I don't have to put up a wall
I can be myself without putting up a show.

That show was always wasted.
Because deep down I know,
That you longed for the real me.
So here I am, yours for the taking

But why is it hard for you to understand.
That I'm not anyone you would think.
You always look at me smiling
But this time my heart is starting to sink..

Your all I need
Please know that's true.
Cause I love you more then life.
And your the finishing piece to me and you.

© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-11-15 10:50 PM


aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! i totally think this is my favorite that we've done so far. right now i'm smiling so much and my heart almost hurts from knowing deep inside what this means. i love how you finished it!!!! it was a great surprise, lol.
this is definatly my favorite, no question about it. always an honor doing a duet with you!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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2 posted 2008-11-16 12:19 PM


Zach- i love you buddy... this is what i wanted to read....

Juliana- i don't know you personally but this is amazing,   and its nice to know that you like my favorite band as well *cough* Escape The Fate*cough* :-D


both of you did a wondrous job.... hoping to read more of each others solo work and maybe even another duet?

much love,
keagan    a.k.a I am the arch angel

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3 posted 2008-11-16 09:36 AM


thanks keagan. and you should be seeing more of my writing once i get over this stupid writers block, lol. (go escape the fate!!! woo!!!)

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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4 posted 2008-11-16 12:40 PM


I'll be looking forward to it.    until then!    and if you only want to.... add me on msn...   klear94@hotmail.com

you don't have to

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5 posted 2008-11-19 08:17 PM


Very nice guys.

There Julianna, I read it.

{~~*~~}

Miss.Emmalee

"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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6 posted 2008-11-19 10:29 PM


haha, thanks em. love you!!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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