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freeand2sexy
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0 posted 2008-11-14 07:26 PM



Are you going to cry with me
Will we let it all come out
Are you ready to open your eyes and see
What life is really all about

Are you going to scream with me
Take it all in, then let it go
Are you ready to be happy
Finally you'll never be alone

Are you going to dance with him
Letting all problems fade
Are you ready to light up the dim
Take the boring, throw it all away

Are you going to laugh with them
Will you let your face brightly glow
Are you ready to smile, again
Show what was never shown

Are you going to open up your heart
Let out everything thats inside
Are your ready to be a part
Of your unforgotten life

Are you going to cry with me
Only tears of joy will show
Are you ready to believe
What you never wanted to know

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

© Copyright 2008 Christine Juarez - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-11-14 09:21 PM


Oh wow Christine!!! This is just wow! This made me think a lot and all I got to say is Bravo! Keep up the writing you sure have a talent for it!

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

xxxFallingSixFeetxxx
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2 posted 2008-11-20 11:20 PM


I ADORE your poetry! This one is exceptional. Such a joy to read your work. -Michaela.
xxxFallingSixFeetxxx
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since 2008-09-16
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3 posted 2008-11-20 11:21 PM


Oh and just so ya know i'm on my friends account to read your poems real quick. lol
freeand2sexy
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4 posted 2008-11-21 07:10 PM


Thanks Michaela, trust me i adore your poetry as well.

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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