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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 2008-11-13 08:35 PM




So this goes out to all the underdogs of the world, the people who against all odd find the courage to battle on, the kids at school who are continually beaten, pushed and bullied and the plain ol' jane's like myself who are destined for great things but can't quite find the courage to reach there destiny and to Keagan and Zach, two young man who showed me the world through an underdogs eyes.
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You say you know just who I am
But you have no idea
The broken pieces of my life
Is after all what brought you here?

But I’m still here and I’m standing
Because I’m tired of backing down
Tired of all the hurtful words
And being kicked down on the ground

I’m here now and I’m hurting
Standing in a pool of pain
In the blood of a thousand hearts
That’s been to hell and back again

You try so hard to bring me down
But you still don’t understand
You can’t break the broken
So here come take my hand

Now it’s your turn to see
How it feels to be like me
So here we go I’ll knock you down
Leave you bleeding on the ground

Your here now and you’re hurting
Standing in a pool of pain
In the blood of a thousand hearts
That’s been to hell and back again

So remember this feeling
How it feels to be alive
What it’s like to see the world
Through an underdog’s eyes

To all the victim’s in the world
Who can’t see past the fog?
This is a ballad for the bullies
An anthem for the underdog

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1 posted 2008-11-13 09:11 PM


From one Underdog to another..

Great work! You captured the feeling perfectly and your words are pretty good. Great work again..

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2008-11-13 09:41 PM


Amazing as always. Great write.

{~~*~~}

Miss.Emmalee

"Who the **** are you?!!?.. GET AWAY FROM MY LIMO!!"

I am the arch angel
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3 posted 2008-11-14 06:18 PM


Jess,wow. amazing but only one thing i have to criticize is that i may be an underdog, i may be one forever but i never will take an advantage and make other people be underdogs under my will, im not like that...no body should, but yet the world is full of people and people that despise other people so the ones that choose to bully are just scared of the world.               much love jess

keagan

RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 2008-11-14 06:54 PM


THanks Guys...

And Keagan.. I Know THAT!! lol

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