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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-11-09 05:22 PM


Hey, wow been soo long since last time I posted. Here's another poem umm...yea just let me know what you think.

Erase the Dirt:

It's not the fact that I stayed silent,
But the fact I didn't scream,
That's why I blame myself,
And why he plagues my dreams.

I've bathed and I've showered,
I've scrubbed and I've cleaned,
But I still see the dirt,
And feel those hands on me.

I've bled seas of crimson,
And drowned in my own tears,
I've written many poems,
But can't rhyme away these fears.

It's not the fact he betrayed me,
But the fact I trusted him,
That's why this pain hurts so,
And why my life's so grim.

I've revealed my dark secret,
Repeated it so many times,
But I can't erase the dirt,
Not even through my rhymes.

I've stopped myself from bleeding,
Yet my tears still run free,
And I am still a captive,
Chained in my misery.

It's not the fact I couldn't stop him,
But the fact I didn't try,
That's the reason I feel guilt,
And the reason why I cry.

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2008-11-09 07:13 PM


Hey Sweetie,

This is WOW.. love it, Maybe thats the pregnancy tears kicking in lol...

Your such a good person and i hope your doing better these days.. how's you and bubbi.. You gettin fat yet?, if i get any fatter i won't be walking in much more lolz...

Take Care Dani,
Love n Hugs
Jess

HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
2 posted 2008-11-09 08:20 PM


hey thanks. I think it might be both I've been very emotional lately. And omg I'm huge I feel and look like a whale and waddle like a duck. But things are not really changing and idk I just keep on hoping and wishing.
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
3 posted 2008-11-09 08:49 PM


Keep holding on sweetie.. things have to get better.. How's ur dad n bro been about the bub.. they accepting it.. do u have all the stuff u need? like a cot etc...??
HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey
4 posted 2008-11-09 08:59 PM


my dad hates the fact that I'm keeping it he's mad that I'm pregnant but my dads a jerk anyways so yea. My bro is really excited he likes to feel the baby kick it's really cute he's so happy. Idk I think I have stuff I need I have absolutely no clue though.
How you been?? How ya feelin??

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
5 posted 2008-11-09 09:20 PM


Aww boo to ur dad.. So glad JAke's happy... and i'm glad he's excited... I've been really great.. I'm in engaged which i think i told you.. I'm fat n hormonal.. but i can't work cause i have highblood pressure.. had an ultraound the other day and it's a little girl.. so proud.. Andrew is extremly excited he' painting  the nursery today.. and her bought her a football jumper (Not that i'm even gunna let him put it on her).. lolz.. but yea hunni i'm great... I'm just hoping things are gunna be great for you too.. if there's anything ur not sure about do email me.. i try to go n read em once every few days..

Love n hugs to my favourite preggy girl

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