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0 posted 2008-11-09 12:34 PM


Okay its late and I almost couldn't finish this poem due to never ending tears.. Hope you guys like... Honestly I don't like this poem too much..
I'm walking down the pale lit hallway's
Fighting back the tears..
Doctors say there's not much time
Oh why is this I fear?

So many memories flies before my eyes
Although I'm not laying on the hospital bed.
I don't want to let you go
Because my heart would be better off dead.

The monitor in your room is beating frantically
And my heart is beating at that pace.
Your eyes are slowly slipping
And there's tears streaming down my face.

They said you had a few months to live
And they did the best they could.
If only I could preform miracles
If i could save you from this, I would.

But the monitor is slowing down
Your cheast ceases to rise and fall
With a sigh they lower their heads
"Oh dear God.." I run out to the white hall

This can't be happening...
this is all a terrible nightmare
I should be way more stronger then this
There was plenty of time for me to prepare...

But I relize no matter how much time there is
You can't simply ignore the ones you love
No matter what happened today...
I know that you'll be watching me up above.



  

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1 posted 2008-11-09 04:02 AM


How sad, Zach.  I want to box up hugs and send them your way.

A

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2 posted 2008-11-10 12:50 PM


Awww thanks hun. That really means alot..

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

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