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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-11-08 01:33 PM



Seeing Is Believing

When I wake up
I’m going to rule the world
Stand on my own shadow
Hold the moon in my palm

When I wake up
I’m going to tread the sun
Trace the trickle of my dreams
To heaven and beyond

When I wake up
I’ll bid a fond farewell
To my rose coloured glasses
As the world’s a brighter place

When I wake up
I’ll greet the earth with
One warm kiss
I’ll greet the day with light

When I wake up
I’ll walk on a path of
Broken kaleidoscope
Walk right up to you

When I wake up
I will be no different
But the world around me
Would have changed

When I wake up
And see this new sight
I’ll go right back sleep
I’ll know it’s just a dream.


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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-11-10 07:06 PM


Awesome!!!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

Taylor See
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since 2008-10-07
Posts 55
North Carolina, US
2 posted 2008-11-12 02:19 PM


Excellent poem Octave.
This was a very interesting one. Hmm, still thinking about it haha. Very well written.

Great job!

And as each player moves their piece, confident and tall
They forget that they can move themselves, in the greatest game of all

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