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I am the arch angel
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0 posted 2008-11-07 10:16 PM




My heart races every time you take a pace
I smile every time i see your face

You give me that feeling inside
That you'll always be there by my side

There cannot be anybody like you
Without you my world would  be blue

There is that saying that true love never dies
Well i can see that in your eyes

I am a puzzle, and your my final piece
Someone my heart just couldn't release

Your the one who makes me complete
I love that feeling when our eyes meet

Please don't go, I'd know I'd miss ya
Because you are mine, i love you Carissa
well this is obviously a love poem,my girlfriend means the world to me , hope you liked it

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1 posted 2008-11-08 01:50 AM


Hoooooooollllllllyy!.....that was even better than the last one of ur's that I read!
Love this poem, super duper job!   

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RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 2008-11-08 01:55 AM


This is awesome...

How i feel about Andrew.. love it hunni...
xx

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3 posted 2008-11-08 07:42 AM


Awww! I Love the poem! Hope you and Carissa last forever.. hehe..

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

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