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shattered-smiles
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0 posted 2008-11-06 11:25 PM


Falling

Crashing

Drowning

The depth of your fear
swallowing the very existence
of your being...

Landing

Breaking

Suicide

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 2008-11-08 01:40 AM


Huh...nice write dear. Haven't seen you around for a while.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

shattered-smiles
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2 posted 2008-11-08 11:05 AM


Yeah.. I haven't been around for a while because the stuff that I write these days is mostly too dark and personal to put on pip.  I might put some of my new stuff on here yet.. but I don't know.. maybe.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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