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Taylor See
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since 2008-10-07
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0 posted 2008-11-05 03:31 PM


So here we are
We stand again
Upon the precipice
Of Despair.

I face North
And you to South.
Back to back we
Edge a little closer
To the fall.

A wind whips wild
Across the rocky
Brine-slicked ridge.
Waves wrap wrathful wreaths
Of water to the sky.

Beyond the black horizon
The sun boils
bright beneath the dark sea.

From high above
The clouds are pierced
With shafts of starlight.
Slanting sharp across the sea
Like pillars straining
To hold up the night.

Our clothes dance frantic
With the angry wind
Like shells of the people
We thought we were

A wall of water
Like the final hand of Earth
Explodes upward as if
In earnest
To beseech the lonely
Souls that neared the edge

As one we turn to face
The polar life, the other
Person who shared it all.

But we do not see.
We are blind behind
Silken folds of woven doubt.
Eyes too clouded to perceive
The longing face
That is our Other

We turn and step
To the razor's edge, the rocky ledge
Our Faces calm
Devoid of feeling
Prepare to plummet to our peril

But as the final step awaits
A frenzied fall to end it all
A glorious sun, like life itself
Erupts from the rim
Of an endless sea

Blinded, we shield our eyes
And blink
As strangely
We turn again
To one another
Clasp our hands and
walk away

The silken masks have slipped
The veil upon the world
Is lifted by the burning blaze

And at last we see!

And as each player moves their piece, confident and tall
They forget that they can move themselves, in the greatest game of all

© Copyright 2008 William Taylor Cody - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2008-11-26 07:09 PM


Wow, loved reading it, would of read it before but it looked kinda long, and i don't have a good attention span.

I love pancakes!!!

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