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Teen Poetry #8

Blue skies

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-10-31 10:36 PM

The bright blue skies
I stare right into
Look upon the wise
To tell me what to do

But the skies turn gray
Almost black
Even the wise aren't okay
There's something they lack

Open up my eyes
Show me the truth
Help me realize
That years left, are few

Tell me what they know
Tho not even they can see
Where I should go
Where I'm meant to be

Cuz even the skies
May feel unsure
Even they cry
About what they endure

Raining upon my face
But I'll still look up
Searching for another place
Where I'll be loved

I look up at the blue skies
But even they turn gray
I look up upon the wise
To show me the right way

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

aimebaby
New Member

since 2008-11-01

Posts 9

1 posted 2008-11-01 08:09 PM

It is a great poem. The contrast between feelings and the weather is an interesting one and you portrayed it well.

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-11-01 08:30 PM

Thanks!!!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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