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Teen Poetry #8

be my savior

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-10-25 08:12 PM

i'm so confused about who i am
i don't even know myself
and i'm the only one
who knows what i've felt

i'm not who i was
and i don't know what went wrong
and now i'm stuck in these memories
of a time now long gone

i've buried myself
inside these walls
don't leave a message
because i'm not taking calls

this life is so messed up
and i cant do this alone
can you be my savior
can you save this sinking stone

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-10-27 08:33 PM

Great poem, can so relate espesially now.

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-10-27 09:56 PM

Love it.. As Always.. ...

Jess
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