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My_Innocents_Interupted17
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0 posted 2008-10-22 01:04 PM



NOT YET!!!           writen 9-6-08

I'm not ready to let this go,
i've just started bia.
he screwed me over,
over more than i imagined.
so now i'm here,
i'm the one thats angry and upset.
sometimes i just want to scream so loud,
And break stuff and tare my skin in half.
It's under my skin so deep eating at me,
waiting for me to explode.
It gets at me when i least exspect it,
When i sleep.
Dance away the bad,
And dwell in my anger.
I just want to run away from it,
Escape my life every minutes.
But thinking about it,
Only makes it all much more possible for me to do.
I cant stand being in my body,
I want to ripe it off me.
i feel sick to my stomache,
Want to puck my guts out.
I dont want to deal with this,
Just want to throw it in a closet.
Let me live my life the way i did before him,
Let me go back to the hell i lived.
I would rather, than to think about hgim.

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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 2008-10-22 06:32 PM


Lots of emotion. Good job!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

aimebaby
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since 2008-11-01
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2 posted 2008-11-01 08:28 PM


really great. its basically every emotion i feel when i'm frustrated, and put into words.
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3 posted 2008-11-04 03:46 PM


I agree with the others. Nice emotion in this poem.

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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