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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2008-10-15 07:21 PM



I'm finding myself,
here in your arms feeling
safe and an unending
love binding us together.

Lost in bliss and comfort
The warm of your body.
Melts my heart of stone.
Your smile gives me satisfaction.

Those perfect lips of yours
twist into a beautiful smile that
is all mine.
Oh how I love that feeling it sends me.

Megnetic attraction brings me to those lips.
Soft and firm dance together.
Love is what this is.
I couldn't wish for anything more.

Your hand finds my fingers
and slowly entertwines with mine.
Soon enough something cold is there,
ask I look down to see something sparkle.

I always wished for this day to come.
This symbol of love and devotion.
I could never have asked for more.
You smile and bow down on your knee.

I see your mouth form words,
I can't hear you but I don't need to.
The answer is yes,
always has and always will be.

Who ever said happy ending's
only lived deep within pages?
For I have found my ending.
You are my ending.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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1 posted 2008-10-15 08:26 PM


YAY! I really like this poem! And I like the parts you wrote. We should do this again sometime..

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2008-10-15 10:25 PM


Yay is right!!! I too really like this one. And by the way, your stanza's are amazing too. Great job and yes, we shall have to do this again!!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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