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0 posted 2008-10-15 07:03 PM


Did you see the tears slowly fall
Did you feel her arms gently shake
Her pale white face, hidden from it all
An unwilling heart, about to break

Can you feel her timid hands
Or has she hid them away
Can you say you understand
That you discovered her pain

Have you seen her dark brown eyes
Can she even look at you
Will you lift up the disguise
To uncover something new

Did you see the tears slowly fall
From the eyes you dare to see
It's hard to look at her at all
When you know she isn't free

Can you feel her timid hands
So cold you can barely tough
Can you say you understand
That your warmth will never be,

                        Enough!


"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

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1 posted 2008-10-15 07:19 PM


Awwww!! That was sad. But amazingly great!

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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