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0 posted 2008-10-15 10:46 AM



The melody will flow.
And the wind will continue to blow.
But love is like a flower.
It gets stronger by the hour.
Although the flower will wilt and die.
I won't let a second go by.
Where I won't think of you.
I hope you know this too.
You were once my life.
Even though we battled through the pain and strife.
But even people have to move on.
That's how it goes in this song.
We'll both leave; broken hearted.
Get on the train and be departed.
The steam whistle shrieks
Look back; eye's cold and weak.
The train will move forward; Hopefully my heart will do the same.
I'll never forget you my once known lover. Please never forget my name.
Our hearts will be connected by this invisible string.
Leaving me with this song for me to sing.

Looking back to see that your gone; happy and content.
I'll move on with my life and live how I want to;live in the moment.


~Okay so this poem isn't like my others. I don't think its quite as good. oh well.. Hope you enjoyed.. Btw the title has no relation to the poem.. Anyway Enjoy! ~



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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2008-10-15 12:06 PM


I love IT
LOVE IT

Taylor See
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since 2008-10-07
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2 posted 2008-10-15 02:18 PM


Great poem. I found myself making up a melody for it as I read.

And as each player moves their piece, confident and tall
They forget that they can move themselves, in the greatest game of all

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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3 posted 2008-10-15 06:51 PM


It was awesome. Absolutly loved it!

"Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!"

BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
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4 posted 2008-10-17 04:22 AM


great... i enjoyed reading this one...

~~*K. B.*~~

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