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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-10-09 05:27 PM

Raven

Raven tipped his wing in flight
In night, through wind, Octobers chill
And landed in the dead trees branch
A hollow tree, decaying black
And ugly sound from him comes forth
A raven shriek in answered lilt
I watch the bird fly far away
And see his wing caress the moon
His plumage swoops down from above
A piece of black from night’s abyss
And all the while my thoughts look deep
In hopes and frailties he may come back
Bit in the midnight diamond sky
The raven never sounds again
And many moons and years shall pass
Before I dare forget his sigh

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-10-09 11:30 PM

OH YAY!! You're back! Everyones coming back!! Alex Kate...OK maybe just the two.

Is this a sequel to your "A Ravens Wisper"?

I don't know, but I realy liked the symbolism...not sure I got all of this.

As for the title WHO's COPYING WHO??

hahahahaha
Anyway loved the poem.

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-10-09 11:37 PM

Uh ok NOW I'm adding it to my library...:p

OH SHUT UP SHUT UP AND GIVE SOMEONE ELSE A CHANCE!!!!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2008-10-13 02:13 PM

kate, fantastic to read your work. Such subtlety is refreshing. Great to read your work again.

Taylor See
Member

since 2008-10-07

Posts 55
North Carolina, US

4 posted 2008-10-13 02:51 PM

Wow, that is amazing! Very descriptive and the flow is excellent. The imagery is fantastic. If this is a sequel I'm gonna have to dig up the first one

Looking forward to more,

Taylor

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-10-16 05:54 PM

AHh it's good to be back, sorry for the delay, but I have had schooling and whatnot, so I took this creative writing class, from the sound of it it has helped thanks for all the comments.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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