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Teen Poetry #8

I Can't Breath

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2008-10-05 11:54 PM

This is definitly not my best and its a little short, but tell me what you think.

I can't breath
You took the air
I can't think
When you don't care

I can't swim
I'm soon to drown
I can't fly
I'm falling down

I can't see
You took the light
I can't live
I have no right

I can't hear
A word you say
I can't breath
When your in pain

Live in the present but don't forget the future

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-10-06 08:37 AM

Awww.. great poem... Sad though..

-Zach

"I'd rather be anything but ordinary!!"

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