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spiderilia
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since 2008-04-24
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0 posted 2008-10-05 04:35 PM


Uninvented Time Machine

oh I wish,
to go back
to avoid being stuck
but I know that, I cant do this, never

to go back
back in time
when my heart fell behind
and got lost, it got lost there, for ever

back when I
still could feel,
all around, so surreal,
this strange feeling, I thought never ending

when an
innocent rose,
red, alive as I was,
told the truth, and since then Im pretending

when I still
heard your voice
when I still had a choice
way before, I got crashed, like a splinter

oh I wish
for this rose
that had died under frost,
well tough luck, flowers don't bloom at winter.


tell me what you think...


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