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Teen Poetry #8

Home Sweet Home

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-09-25 12:07 PM

Different from my usual style. Though not totally sure what my ususal style is. Enjoy.

Home Sweet Home

One wall black
One wall blue
Three closed doors I
Can't see through

Red, red roof
Ceiling bare
Just one person
Not quite there

Concrete cold
Walls stand strong
Road runs past
One mile long

Lies are scratched
Cold steel feelings
I look up to
My stormy ceiling

Walls are canvas
Ink to stain
Waiting for
Undecided pain

Anger rattles
From wall to wall
As weak foundations
Take their toll

Closed inside
A box so bare
Out the window
Unbroken stare

Naked body
Lies alone
In this place
I call home

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-09-25 07:06 PM

WOW it's amazing and it flowed so nicely! I LOVED IT!!!

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