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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2008-09-24 10:45 PM



Yeah, I love you
Didn't you know
What was I suppose to do
I couldn't let go

Yeah, I need you
Didn't you see
My eyes show what's true
The you and me

Yeah, I fell for you
I wonder if they saw
The love grew
There were no flaws

Yeah, I want you
But I know why it can't be
I'll sing the blues
As I say hi to insanity

Yeah, I love you
Didn't you know
I hope you love me, too
Cuz I'll never let go

Live in the present but don't forget the future

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BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
Posts 126
Philippines
1 posted 2008-09-29 03:37 AM


nice one... i enjoyed reading this... :-)

~~*K. B.*~~

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2 posted 2008-09-29 08:06 AM


"Yeah, I want you
But I know why it can't be
I'll sing the blues
As I say hi to insanity"

Love this stanza! Keep up the writing hun! hehe

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