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Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-09-20 03:17 PM

This is different from ym usual style. Well, had a major break through. Have been hanging onto the last shreds of a very long friendship which ended very messily, hoping that if i could somehow cling onto it, it wouldn't end.
Silly me. So, i have had a revelation. feel free to comment on it. =D

Flying Solo

Put that song on
100 decibels loud
Hold my head up
Stand up proud

Take down that box
Ease off the lid
Think about the bad times
Thinkof what you did

Take that special picture
Of us beside the sea
Using silver blades
Seperate you from me

Tear down the mementos
Screw them up for good
Rip the memories up
Just like I should

Have done so long ago
Ridded my life of you
Wiped you from my mind
What else could I do?

Forget every tear I
Cried and cried again
Forget the hurt and sadness
Forget the aching pain

I don’t need you
I can do this alone
Farewell to the memories
Whats done is done

Put that song on
100 decibels loud
I can do this alone
Without you around

[This message has been edited by Octave (09-20-2008 04:17 PM).]

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2008-09-20 03:41 PM

WOW, Its extremely Amazing. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

Live in the present but don't forget the future

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-09-20 06:14 PM

I liked the poem...it's going in my library.
However I'm not sure whether I'm happy or sad for you. Hope it's all for the best.

Don't believe Everything you Think

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

3 posted 2008-09-22 01:24 PM

I love this poem and I can also relate to it.

"Put that song on
100 decibels loud
I can do this alone
Without you around"

So many times I've blasted a certain song that has reminded me of someone- I think it helps but sometimes it just reminds you : / . Good luck letting this go, I know it's one of the hardest things to do. Great poem.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

4 posted 2008-09-23 03:56 AM

i love reading this one... 100 decibels could crack my eardrums :-) but i love the emotion on this piece... library...

~~*K. B.*~~

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