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Saya_lost_soul
New Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 7
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-09-15 11:57 PM


The love of my life...my soulmate,your my best friend.
         I don't know anything...at all
You're part of me...like breathing, now half of me is left.
         I don't know anything...at all

Who am I to say...you love me?
         I don't know anything...at all
Who am I to say...you need me?
         Colour me blue,I'm lost in you!

Why am I still waiting?
         I don't know anything...at all
Why am I still searching?
         I don't know anything...at all
And who am I to say...you need me?

Please tell me the truth 'cause thats all I need and want to hear!    

<love is but a dream>

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Sara Mikael
Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

1 posted 2008-09-16 12:25 PM


alot of emotions....I loved it

THE PAIN OF LOVE

freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2008-09-16 07:15 PM


it was soooo good
Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-09-16 10:11 PM


Beautiful! I don't quite hear the song though hmmm...

(Library)

Don't believe Everything you Think

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