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Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-09-15 03:34 AM



Another night another drink,
I feel the pain so strong I scream,
I am standing on the edge, the brink,
Please god tell me this is a dream.

I long to hold you in my arms,
To feel your lips against mine,
To hide you away from all that harms,
But the players all seem to know there line.

I beg I plead I scream I cry,
I hold you close to feel your heart,
Wake me tell me this is all a lie,
Please god I don't want to be apart.

I love him is that so wrong?
I am not asking much,
Don't Silence his life like a song,
I await each day in a hush.

You poisoned his lungs,
So he can not draw breath,
I hear the lies from there tongues,
Just once more to for his caress.

I Beg I plead I scream I cry,
Take me instead I plead,
God don't let him die,
My love for him shall fill your need.

Please please don't make me say good bye...

I cant take it don't let him die.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder
1 posted 2008-09-16 03:16 PM


I wrote this after i found out how sick they truely are, sorry if it seems broken.

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