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Implicity |
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dah1namedj0na Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 19 |
To my dear girlfriend =) There are no words that I can possibly say The love for you I have, is impossible to convey My eclipsed world now has a beaming light Due your radiating presence, shining so bright. Never have I held such a joy in my life Right now my girlfriend, in years my wife. I’m now balanced on this lifelong seesaw Because you’re what compensates for my tragic flaw Always seeking for that “One true love” But you came and set me free, to fly like a dove. And now with your love you’ve let me live. In return, surviving for you is what I’ll now give. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
Wow, to have a love like that, it puts all others to shame. I really relly liked this, it was wonderful. It was so flawless in its flow, gentel and yet so powerfull. Becca The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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dah1namedj0na Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 19 |
Thank You very much Becca! i was concerned about some flows in the wording of the poem myself haha. Your comment is very much appreciated!  |
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