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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-09-13 04:27 PM


Just a little something I wrote. When I wrote this there were many things on my mind, so I'm sorry ahead of time if it jumps around a little.


My Fate:

I'm lying on the floor
you turn and shut the door
how did we get to this
the bruises on my wrist
I used to see love in your eyes
but now all I see are the lies

all you do is drink
do you even think
what this does to me
you never say your sorry

I left everything for you
now what do you do
you play your little games
with hate running through your veins

I see it in your eyes
as my last hope dies
you throw me against the wall
I crumple to the floor

you scream and yell
I'm living in a hell
I cry out in fright
it rings out through the night
when they come, it'll be too late
this is it, this is my fate.

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Sara Mikael
Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34

1 posted 2008-09-14 09:09 AM


i really loved it and i am sorry about it

THE PAIN OF LOVE

Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
2 posted 2008-09-15 12:55 PM


Abuse, hate AHHHH! when will it all change? This was an amazaing read, but all i really wanted to say was, if your living in that situation, Get out.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

GothicCherry
Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
3 posted 2008-09-18 05:23 PM


oddly...i know how it feels to be in that kinda situation. I love how you can express your feelings and share them so easily. God bless you!!


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