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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-09-01 10:29 PM

sugar sweet
eating my teeth
take my breath
and let me sleep

so you can haunt me
in my dreams
and keep me together
at the seems

and i can see it
burning bright
like a beacon
in the night

take me away
send me along
what made you write me
after so long

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-09-02 05:01 PM

You are very, wow. I just wrote someone I hadn't talked to in such a long time. Sometimes I wonder if you are Stephen and you're just messing with my mind. But I liked the poem, very nice.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-09-02 07:39 PM

nope haha. im bryan. the infamous CO fo sho.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-09-02 08:01 PM

Good, b/c I have an over active paranoia. Thanks for the reasurance. Hahaha.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-09-02 11:36 PM

ROFL!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA HA HA HAHAHAHA
I was just going to say how awesome this poem was and how much it made me think but then I read the replies! Oh awesomeness! that just made my day!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

5 posted 2008-09-03 08:56 PM

sorry, whats ROFL?

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

6 posted 2008-09-04 07:17 AM

Hey Gorgeous Boi,
OMG GREAT WORK...
Love all your work and you know that.

Hugs n Kisses Til The Cows Come Home,
Jess

P.S ROFL= Rolling On Floor Laughing

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2008-09-04 09:17 AM

Haha.. I like the poem.. I found it interesting.. In a funny type of way.. hehe...

Peace on Earth!

-Zach

Octave
Member

since 2008-07-29

Posts 186
Highlands, Scotland.

8 posted 2008-09-04 12:13 PM

Great stuff. I really liked it. =]

YoungAmbition
New Member

since 2008-09-03

Posts 7
London Town! UK baby.

9 posted 2008-09-05 11:43 AM

I like the first two stanzas the most and it was a very interesting read =D

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