" That the childish look for this world wasn`t so imaginary"

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Teen Poetry #8

" That the childish look for this world wasn`t so imaginary"

DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12

Posts 18
BULGARIA

0 posted 2008-08-28 08:33 AM

When I was little
I had a dream
Back then I couldn`t see that
Dreams aren`t real

I wanted to be a princess
To have a prince
And with many beautiful dresses
For a dance, every boy to convince

And in my castle
With many, many dolls
For everything a vassal
That comes every time I call

Red roses in the garden
The white ones inside
People say “I beg your pardon”
With an enormous pride

Spoons made of gold
Glasses made of silver
Which are used only to hold
Cuss they are too expensive to eat off

But now when I grow up
I see that some parts of that are true
That the childish look for this world
Wasn`t so imaginary view…

Like the princes who wanted a prince
Like the girl who wanted to be pretty
Like many of us today who are truing
to be beautiful in peoples eyes…pity

Like the castle and everything in it
People want big houses, with costly equip
Everything to be in it`s place, to fit
And with someone to take care of all that thing

Like the gardens of roses
Like the people`s behave when they are stars
Some of us cut off the thornlies
So other can see only the shiny of what they are

Like the money and the gold
Like the price of everything
People shall always want
To have the most of that they could bring

It is so sad that we all want so many of the life
And we don`t see the real wealth that it has
We don`t appreciate what we have, we want more… that is like a knife
It has two edges – the taste of money is worthless when you realize that for that you forgot
What was like to live…

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-08-28 08:41 PM

Your poem is very good and also true. Everyone wants and can't see what they truely have... Great poem Desislava!

-Zach

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

DeSi - BG
Junior Member

since 2008-08-12

Posts 18
BULGARIA

2 posted 2008-08-29 01:42 AM

Thanks Zach

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

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