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3 walls and a door
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3 walls and a door |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Just something I wrote really not one of my best. But let me know what you think. 3 Walls and a Door: three walls that wont bend a floor that doesn't cry a door that wont say a word with her locked on the other side the lock wont make a move wont let her run and hide the key hung above the door was her only way outside huddled in a ball is the only way to live maybe just this time it will hide her from his fist at only 6 years old she knows nothing more all she knows is here sitting on the floor locked between three walls that will not give and just won't bend held captive by a door that only lets her daddy in victim of a lock that can't seem to hear her cries a good laugh for the key that keeps her locked inside another casualty of his hands that no one will ever see alone here on the floor is all she'll get to be |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
this is a nice one... not bad. Such a sad story of a girl that's abused... I love reading it.  ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
so sad, well written, I liked it and could picture it. |
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Sara Mikael Junior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 34 |
I really loved this poem ....I can see the pain THE PAIN OF LOVE |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I could see the little girl and all i wanted to do was walk through the door so i could get to her, and take her out with me. No more children need to feel the pain. The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive |
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