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Green grass and high tides, with black sunshine
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Green grass and high tides, with black sunshine |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
okay the title was completely random. but get over it. and enjoy. All i want to do Is get out of my shoes show me why you start it pierces me like a dart Drama is overrating but we've been dating, for awhile now say what you like i don't care just like that day i was a dare make no sense, have no reason keep your mouth shut i don't want to hear your treason long days,short lives,live it get over yourself dangit Sit down, open your ears why have you lied to me all these years oh please don't tell me your answer my emotions have been diagnosed with cancer this is who i am i trusted you like fam i live for nothing die for something figure out the wrong life is like ping-pong back and forth here we go seems kinda like the Olympic show well i'm over it now don't have a cow If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Oh My Keagan Pants.. I Love this.. Your So talented... N Thanks for making me cry with ur comment... aww |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Frankly I liked the Title although it didn't make sence to your poem hahaha.... I really like the poem itself... We've all been in a situation like that before and its easy to connect to.. Thanks for the great read! Zach |
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