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shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-08-23 10:15 PM

Another day gone to waste
Another cut upon her face
A broken heart has left for dead
Another silent tear was shed

Another angel fallen down
Another silent, deafening sound
A wingless flight up in the sky
Another bloody death she’ll die

Another story left untold
Another pen that’s uncontrolled
A little girl with glistening eyes
Another night with unheard cries

Another bandage on your skin
Another scar that’s left within
A teardrop down her porcelain face
Another girl to be disgraced

Another day, she’ll make it through
Another night for her debut
A girl determined to show her smile
Another fight for her worthwhile

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-08-23 11:49 PM

OMG Tori.. this is by far one of the best poems i've ever read on PIP.. this is amazing... You have some talent...

My heart n hugs go out too u..

As i said ppl need to read this.. because amazing lies everywhere in this poem

Melissa Inside
Junior Member

since 2008-07-19

Posts 13
Baltimore

2 posted 2008-08-24 02:30 PM

wow. thats really all i can say about this piece. it was beautifuly written and just blew my mind away. you really are a talented writer.

keepitup por favor[=.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-25 11:10 AM

wow, this is a great one to read. touching...

nice job!

~~*K. B.*~~

hiddenIntheDark
Junior Member

since 2008-08-27

Posts 20

4 posted 2008-08-31 11:41 PM

AMAZING!!

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

5 posted 2008-09-13 12:04 PM

I can truly relate to this poem. It's beautiful and well written.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2008-09-15 12:52 PM

... One moment speachless.

That was so good, it had such a powerful feeling and makes me think, ,it was just what i needed to read.

Thank you so much, Becca.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

poshjenner99
New Member

since 2008-11-05

Posts 2

7 posted 2008-11-06 03:58 PM

wow that is amzing... you are right, poems are amazing, they tell so much

peace out,
joshmeister

xsaamaanthaax
Junior Member

since 2008-11-28

Posts 21
USA, Arizona.

8 posted 2008-12-04 02:12 AM

Wow, that was amazing. You should write more. You obviously have good skills

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2008-12-04 08:50 AM

you know...I really thought I replied to this one. I think this is really one of the best ones in Teen. It is like this, and it's hard. Good job

KandyGrl511
Member

since 2008-11-30

Posts 52
Michigan

10 posted 2008-12-04 09:42 PM

loved this soo much~!?!~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

11 posted 2008-12-06 01:19 PM

Another angel fallen down
Another silent, deafening sound
A wingless flight up in the sky
Another bloody death she’ll die

Wow- I loved how you used the the metaphor of angels its so beautiful. I loved the imagery and the way you worded it. THis is a powerful write! You have a lot of talent!
Strong piece of writing!
Rhia

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