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Silent Suicide - The Diary of a Cutter

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shattered-smiles
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since 01-20-2008
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inside the shadows


0 posted 08-23-2008 10:15 PM       View Profile for shattered-smiles   Email shattered-smiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for shattered-smiles

Another day gone to waste
Another cut upon her face
A broken heart has left for dead
Another silent tear was shed

Another angel fallen down
Another silent, deafening sound
A wingless flight up in the sky
Another bloody death she’ll die

Another story left untold
Another pen that’s uncontrolled
A little girl with glistening eyes
Another night with unheard cries

Another bandage on your skin
Another scar that’s left within
A teardrop down her porcelain face
Another girl to be disgraced

Another day, she’ll make it through
Another night for her debut
A girl determined to show her smile
Another fight for her worthwhile

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

© Copyright 2008 Tori - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 07-08-2006
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1 posted 08-23-2008 11:49 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

OMG Tori.. this is by far one of the best poems i've ever read on PIP.. this is amazing... You have some talent...

My heart n hugs go out too u..

As i said ppl need to read this.. because amazing lies everywhere in this poem
Melissa Inside
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since 07-19-2008
Posts 13
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2 posted 08-24-2008 02:30 PM       View Profile for Melissa Inside   Email Melissa Inside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Melissa Inside

wow. thats really all i can say about this piece. it was beautifuly written and just blew my mind away. you really are a talented writer.

keepitup por favor[=.
BeyaK
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since 08-07-2008
Posts 127
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3 posted 08-25-2008 11:10 AM       View Profile for BeyaK   Email BeyaK   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BeyaK

wow, this is a great one to read. touching... nice job!

~~*K. B.*~~

hiddenIntheDark
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since 08-27-2008
Posts 20


4 posted 08-31-2008 11:41 PM       View Profile for hiddenIntheDark   Email hiddenIntheDark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hiddenIntheDark

AMAZING!!
SarBear
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since 06-05-2003
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5 posted 09-13-2008 12:04 PM       View Profile for SarBear   Email SarBear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SarBear

I can truly relate to this poem. It's beautiful and well written.
Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder


6 posted 09-15-2008 12:52 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

... One moment speachless.


That was so good, it had such a powerful feeling and makes me think, ,it was just what i needed to read.

Thank you so much, Becca.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

poshjenner99
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7 posted 11-06-2008 03:58 PM       View Profile for poshjenner99   Email poshjenner99   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for poshjenner99

wow that is amzing... you are right, poems are amazing, they tell so much

peace out,
joshmeister
xsaamaanthaax
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since 11-28-2008
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8 posted 12-04-2008 02:12 AM       View Profile for xsaamaanthaax   Email xsaamaanthaax   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for xsaamaanthaax

Wow, that was amazing. You should write more. You obviously have good skills
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with you


9 posted 12-04-2008 08:50 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you know...I really thought I replied to this one. I think this is really one of the best ones in Teen. It is like this, and it's hard. Good job
KandyGrl511
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since 11-30-2008
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10 posted 12-04-2008 09:42 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

loved this soo much~!?!~
rhia_5779
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11 posted 12-06-2008 01:19 PM       View Profile for rhia_5779   Email rhia_5779   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rhia_5779

Another angel fallen down
Another silent, deafening sound
A wingless flight up in the sky
Another bloody death she’ll die

Wow- I loved how you used the the metaphor of angels its so beautiful. I loved the imagery and the way you worded it. THis is a powerful write! You have a lot of talent!
Strong piece of writing!
Rhia
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