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DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12
Posts 18
BULGARIA

0 posted 2008-08-21 06:03 AM



We are like the paintings… Different, but still art

Who are you?
Who am I?
No one knowes
No one tryes...

Maybe we are different
Maybe we are one
Or we coun`t see that
Cus we don`t want

But I think we are one
We all can cry, smile or feel
No mather that we are different from the otside
We are the same from the in…

Every one of us has a soul
Every one of us has a heart
We are like the paintings…
Different colours, but still art!!!

Maybe some of us are paint with a full brush
While other are made from the hands of a painter
And in some there has been put the last touch
While someone else has just began to make it…

Some of us display sadness
Like the paintings of the war
Other are hiding madness
Like Picasso`s Dora Maar

But there also are paintings that
Keep the hope in their canvas
Andsome can make you smile
Evan only when near them you pass …

But we are all paintings, paint by someone
No mather that each of us have a different name or look
Different are the colors we are made of…
But we all are sill art!Like the pages of a book.

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

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BeyaK
Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126
Philippines
1 posted 2008-08-21 04:49 PM


We are like the paintings…
Different colours, but still art!!!

enjoyed reading this one.good job desi...

~~*K. B.*~~

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
2 posted 2008-08-21 06:11 PM


this is really good and i enjoyed reading it. the only thing is tryed is tried, but thats ok these things happen
DeSi - BG
Junior Member
since 2008-08-12
Posts 18
BULGARIA
3 posted 2008-08-22 02:41 AM


Thanks for the freat replies.I`m glad you`ve liked it and next time I`ll write tired, not tyred (thanks for the spelling mistake) :P

-Desi-

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

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