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BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

0 posted 2008-08-16 10:51 AM

I believe on angels
the one that holds your hands
cover you up with their wings
to protect you by any chance.

I believe on angels
the one that wipes your tears away
lifts you up during your darkest hours
the one that will always stay.

I believe on angels
the one that keeps you warm
at times when the world is cold
just keeping you away from harm.

I believe on angels
the one that touches the heart
I for sure knows one angel of mine
and it's you who's been there from the start.

~~*Kaye B.*~~

DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12

Posts 18
BULGARIA

1 posted 2008-08-16 12:56 PM

Hmmm....Beautiful one

It is really nice and I like the repeatting of first sentence "I belive on angles"

-Desi-

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

2 posted 2008-08-16 01:26 PM

thanks Desi... I'm just inspired to write about angels

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-08-17 03:42 AM

love this.. such a beautifully written poem

Krysti

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

4 posted 2008-08-18 10:39 AM

thanks krysti...

~~*Kaye B.*~~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-08-21 12:20 PM

Awe, verry nice. I love it.

{~~*~~}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

6 posted 2008-08-21 01:12 AM

A very nice warmhearted poem.

I love it!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

7 posted 2008-08-21 04:38 PM

thanks so much XxForever.BrokenxX and Earl R.
It's really nice to know you guys reading my poem and have posted a comment. thanks

~~*K. B.*~~

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

8 posted 2008-08-22 06:42 AM

yes ill have to agree. this was a very warm piece and a great first read for me by you.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

9 posted 2008-08-22 11:05 AM

thanks, Clockwork_Orange... it's really nice that u've appreciated this one. it really encourages me to write more if people like reading some of my pieces here with posted comments thanks a lot again...

~~*K. B.*~~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

10 posted 2008-08-22 06:01 PM

Aww... very heartfelt and warm..

Great first read.. I'll be looking for more of your work for now on..

Zach

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

11 posted 2008-08-23 11:14 AM

thanks Zach... appreciate it to know you've read this one as well.

i will post some soon.

~~*K. B.*~~

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