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My Innocence

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HersheyKiss
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0 posted 08-15-2008 01:07 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

My Innocence

Make me feel better
Make me feel alright
Please say you're sorry
Give me back my life

You took away my innocence
Left me there to cry
Wanting to wash away
Into the deep blue sky

Running running
I can't stop yet
I'm gasping for air
And theres no place to set

Endless emotion
Let them find a way
To get lost in the night
And never return to day

I collaspe I can't breathe
Just make me feel alright
Give me back my innocence
Because I'm too tired to fight
© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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1 posted 08-15-2008 07:57 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

This is really amazing. One of you're best ones yet. Hope your doing okay.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 08-16-2008 03:02 AM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

Awe Hun, I know you can do this, just hang in there and keep breathing. I'm always here for you if you need me. :sqeeze:

  {~~*~~}   Great poem

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Sara Mikael
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3 posted 09-14-2008 04:17 PM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

WHAT A GREAT POEM

THE PAIN OF LOVE

freeand2sexy
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4 posted 09-14-2008 04:32 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

this was a wonderful poem
Abbeon
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5 posted 09-15-2008 01:13 PM       View Profile for Abbeon   Email Abbeon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Abbeon

Let us help you fight, That was what the last line made me think, such a wonderful poem, such emotion.

Becca

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Sara Mikael
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6 posted 07-07-2010 11:14 AM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

WOOWW...I'm amazed........good work
 
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