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DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12
Posts 18
BULGARIA

0 posted 2008-08-14 04:04 AM


You promised me the stars
You told me that each one will be named by me
You promised me the sun
You told me that it will shine only for me…

We all know that the stars are far away
So is the lightning sun
But you are close to them today
Because you left insensibly the ground…

Your breath…where did it go?
Cus when I saw you, you weren`t breading….
And your heart…why did it stopped?
It made mine bleeding…

If only I was next to you
Supporting you, holding you…
But I was not there
… Couldn`t forgive myselve…

Angels please take care of my lover
Give him everithing he needs…
Give him love, embrace, cover
Give im strength up there, to breathe…

I will miss you
I will miss you so much…
I had so many things to tell you
So many to show, to touch

…….

I remember how you promised my some things,
Something about the stars and the sun…
They were far before, but now you have wings
You can spead them and feel so close each one…

You cept on your promise…
You named the stars by me…
You made the sun shine only for me…
I miss yîu…


( I am sorry, there might be mistakes in the spelling)

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

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BeyaK
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since 2008-08-07
Posts 126
Philippines
1 posted 2008-08-14 11:30 AM


such a tragic one... it's quite a hard feeling to lose someone you dearly love... nice one to read

~~*Kaye B.*~~

DeSi - BG
Junior Member
since 2008-08-12
Posts 18
BULGARIA
2 posted 2008-08-14 11:50 AM


Actually I haven`t lost anyone ... I just wrote the poem with no reazon. The idea for it just came up in my mind. I`m glad you` ve liked it
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
3 posted 2008-08-16 03:35 AM


This is really good. I like it alot, haha had me crying for a bit. Good job, hope to read more.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

DeSi - BG
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since 2008-08-12
Posts 18
BULGARIA
4 posted 2008-09-04 04:13 AM


Glad you`ve liked it

-Desi-

The Fate That You Will Win Is The Half Battle, The Other Half Is In The Way You Fight!!!

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