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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-08-11 09:51 PM



Easy Mending

I couldn’t believe I stood there
On the edge of Misery’s Gulf
Prepared to dive, to leap right off
Into my soul’s demise

Strong arms pulled me back
Invisible to me
The hand I held I would have pulled
It took a while see

My lessons hard, and tempting
From myself I even saw
The pull of this delicious death
The poison of the soul

But understanding, the healing tool
The thing that helps the meek
Was my grandest greatest help
It made me strong when weak

I knew what I must do
Though the path scared me to death
I finally tired and preserved
And survived the test

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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Assassin_of_Verse
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1 posted 2008-08-12 01:46 AM


Hmm... I liked your choice of words.
"Gulf of Misery"
That hooked me. ^^ Overall though, it was okay... Not bad, not great, but good.

Thanks for sharing Kate!
BTW, where did you get your signature?

There is power in the pen.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-08-12 03:28 PM


it was a quote from a moive i saw.

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Assassin_of_Verse
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3 posted 2008-08-13 01:25 AM


What movie was it? I'm curious cuz it seems like I've heard it before.

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 2008-08-13 09:09 AM


two weeks notice i think, it was on like tnt or usa or lifetime, i don't know, i watch a lot of movies.

-KAte

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
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5 posted 2008-08-13 02:57 PM


No NOOO! What do you mean I didn't RESPOND TO THIS!?!?

This is So great! Actualy I want to put it to music.

Library

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2008-08-13 03:50 PM


please do. I would love that, you have my permission frank.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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