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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx

0 posted 2008-08-05 10:17 AM



I have lost my hope
Lost my dreams
Lost my faith
And Lost everything that I need
I have lost u
I have lost you forever
Because u tore my heart and ran away
I trusted u with all my heart
I thought u would never leave
But I have so many questions filled up in my heart
Why did u leave
Why did u go
Oh why  x2
Just come back to me
Because I cant stand to be separated from u
Because also you are my hope
My dreams
My faith
and everything that I need
I just need u the most
Oh day by day im starting to be  lonely
Day by day my eyes are becoming  heavier
I cant even go to sleep
Because all I would be worried about is you
Is you  x2
So don’t give me the pain
don’t hurt me
Oh baby just come to me
Because im tired of waiting
Tired of waiting
I miss you so much
So much that you wont be able to imagine
My life has completely changed
Especially when im without you
When im without you  x2
I feel so  lonely
It hurts me so much that I have been loving you
I cant seem to let go of you
It seems like I have lost everything
Everything that I need  x2
But because of you
I have lost my hope
Lost my dreams
Lost my faith
And lost everything that i need
I have lost you forever
Oh baby I have lost you x2
forever
Oh x3
Why  did u tear my heart and ran away
Now theres no happiness in my life
In my life
Now I don’t know what to believe in anymore
My dreams have shattered
My memories with you make me cry
I am so lonely
So lonely
That its driving me crazy
You are everything that i need
are my everything
Now everything is so lonely
But now I have noticed That ii have lost you
Lost you forever
Oh baby  i have lost you

BY MEEEEE

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
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1 posted 2008-08-06 10:39 PM


Hmmm....funny how reading something can bring back emotions you thought were gone. I thought I had come up with a word that discribed such a lonelyness but after i thought about it again i'm not so sure it fits....This is quiet a relatable poem i think, something everyone goes through at one point. Great job.

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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2008-08-07 12:05 PM


thanks but its actually a song like u could see x2 x3 haha i was singing it tooo
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