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THE KEY T0 SET Y0Uh FREE!
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THE KEY T0 SET Y0Uh FREE! |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
I hear your heart crying out for me Yet I don’t know the key, to set you free.. You don’t complain, you just fake the front and hide yo pain But I ask you what do you gain by settling with this stain.? Still a child, taking on the role of an adult Hurt cause the ones whose suppose to care constantly wanna throw out insults.. Staying away just to avoid fights at home Wondering if you the only one with this depression syndrome.. Feeling like you never do anything right But still you wake up each morning and putting up a fight.. Wondering if anyone else see the pain within your soul Tryna figure out who can release this pain as a whole.. You quick to say no way anyone will ever get you down But I be around, seeing you hold yo head down with this “happy”frown.. I see you full of hate that quickly turns to rage Cause yo life is stuck on this same damn page.. Cuts and scrapes constantly tearing away at your heart Yet you stuck tryna figure out which way to part.. Thinking to yo self how you made it this far Without being behind a set of bars.. I know this all sounds a little bizarre But you not the only child with this scar.. I hear your heart crying out for me But I still don’t know the key, to set you free.. |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
i liked this one good job  |
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Sic Sempes Tyrannis Junior Member
since 2008-07-29
Posts 11 |
REally good but the rythm isnt smmoth in places, otherwise very good poem -Sic- |
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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3 Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 16 |
ThANk Y0Uh B0Th!! |
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