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Octave
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since 2008-07-29
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Highlands, Scotland.

0 posted 2008-07-30 04:37 PM


For You

It was when I looked into your eyes
And saw that faded light
It was that moment then and there
That I stepped into the night

When you took your final breath
And said you last goodbye
I let go of your hand
My lips stained with a lie

It was from that very moment
When you stole my fragile heart
As you slipped into the weeping dawn
You took that special part

That bound me as a whole
Glued my every seam
This was no nightmare
This was no dream

You bravery and honesty
You golden heart and steel will
Your never ending love
Was my daily pill

You kept me going through the bad
And on through the worst
You guided me through troubled seas
You found me when I was lost

When my weary head
Touched my weary hands
And my weary feet
Tread through weary lands

You were always there
In my darkness you were light
You stood by my side
And never gave up a fight

But that day changed forever
When you sunk down into sleep
You left me with nothing more
Than the salty tears I weep

You were my sole reason
For living and for life
You were my everything
Through tears, fears and strife

What was I without you?
Without you by my side
I was now standing all alone
With no where now to hide

Never had I felt such pain
Such twisted, bitter hate
How could they have snatched you
Surely this was not fate

But even to this solemn day
You still not have returned
You will mark me forever more
Your scar on me will burn

For no one in this world
Has ever touch my heart
And even though your gone now
I am not ready to part

So I will never say goodbye, my love
Wish you peace I will not do,
For it is not that I do not wish you back
It’s just, I can not live without you.


I recently lost someone incredibley special to me. I couldn't talk about it, so i wrote about it instead.

[This message has been edited by Octave (07-31-2008 04:42 AM).]

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2008-07-30 10:45 PM


My lips stained with a lie

wow that's a powerful statement. I loved this so much, library. it was really amazing.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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