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Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-07-27 09:34 PM


I am haunted by your touch,
Your lips on mine,
Your arms around me,
As you whisper softly to me.


Your words still linger in my ear,
What you said before I left,
The way you looked at me,
I know that you love me.

The sweetness of your Embrace,
The the heat of your skin,
The comfort of your arms,
Your touch so soft.

I Crave your touch,
Your body calls to mine,
I long to be with you,
For you to see the love in my eyes.

I Seek the solace you bring me,
Peace I find when I am with you,
Feeling's of safety and happiness,
your gentle way of love.

You are everything I need,
You share with me you heart,
You give to me your love,
I take away your pain.
You are my Joy,
You bring to me pure happiness,
The warmth of your love,
The passion of your dreams.


Each night away from you I spend,
Makes my heart long for yours,
The Empty corridors resinate's,
Soft foot falls Echo.

I dream of your arms,
Till I can spend the loving night,
Once again by your side,
Till mornings sweet kiss.

I am haunted by your touch,
The memory of your lips,
The warmth of your embrace,
My name on your lips.

I love you,
Are the sweet words you said,
And the carry me back to your arms,
Back to your touch...

The touch that haunts my waking moments

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

© Copyright 2008 Rebecca Mackie - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-07-30 09:49 PM


ohh Beckie babie!!! I loved this.... Miss you txt me kaii?!?!?!
Love you Lots
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-07-30 10:40 PM


that was darling, you have no idea what i would give to have a guy say this to me . . . oh wait, i do. but it was beauitful. your words are amazing. i totally loved this and it's deffinatly going in the library.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Abbeon
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3 posted 2008-09-15 03:45 AM


It is true, love is amazaing, and yes most people would give the world to hear him say this. I belive i am lucky.

Sara Mikael
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4 posted 2008-09-15 03:54 PM


this poem is AMAZING

im not lucky with love and u can read that from my poems

THE PAIN OF LOVE

Clockwork_Orange
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5 posted 2008-09-15 04:56 PM


wow. deep emotion here. i see it and feel it. it takes a great rythm and a great flow to make this happen for me. and you did it nicely.
Abbeon
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6 posted 2008-09-16 03:12 PM


Wow, thanks, i havent been on in a while, and this is one of my older ones. Becca

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

GothicCherry
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7 posted 2008-09-17 05:08 PM


This poem is soo lovely!!! You are blessed...
GothicCherry
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8 posted 2008-09-24 02:31 PM


I had to come back and reread this poem! it's just so pretty!!!
GothicCherry
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9 posted 2008-09-24 02:32 PM


I forgot to add this poem to my library so i had to reply...yet again..
Abbeon
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10 posted 2008-09-25 01:02 PM


Wow thank you, thats so nice of you to say, im glad you like my work.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

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