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Letting go..

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Falling rain
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0 posted 07-20-2008 11:00 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Letting go

Another day goes by.
Another tear rolls down my face.
Thinking just of you...
Trying to walk at an even pace.

Holding myself together
When im falling all apart.
Trying to get over this.
Trying to redo from the start.

I went to your funeral..
And didn't shead a tear
But watching them lower you down.
Triggered my deepest fear.

I never wanted to let go.
And i'll never forget your face.
You loved me from the start.
And it left a subtle trace.

Hands left shaking
But no one knows why.
Trying to be stong..
Too strong to cry.

A new angel was born today.
And is flying way on high.
But left me standing here..
Without a chance to say "Goodbye"

I know your never ending love
Will always have a place in my heart.
But life isn't that easy..
I learned you can't redo things from the start.

Years have passed by
Things are getting better then it sounds.
I'll always miss you. Do you know that?
Next time I'd see you and next time you come around.

I really want to tell you something.
Although Its really hard for me to say.
Wanted to say. "I love you,"  
There wont be a time when I don't miss you. I'll think about you everyday..
© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-20-2008 08:05 PM       View Profile for Just.Another.Falling.Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Just.Another.Falling.Star's Home Page   View IP for Just.Another.Falling.Star

Zach, if this is the poem we were talking about yesterday or today, or whenever it was...its so true. I have tears rolling down my face now as I read it. Amazing poem...and I know the feeling. Thanks for bringing this out here for people to read. Library.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

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2 posted 07-27-2008 01:24 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

it's hard to loose someone you love very much. great poem.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 07-29-2008 04:16 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

omg, if i wasn't in a store i'd be crying. I know what you mean, fantastic wrtie. Library

    {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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4 posted 07-30-2008 12:15 AM       View Profile for I am the arch angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for I am the arch angel

this zach.....is what i feel a poem that goes along with me....i may not be the only one....but it is very true....i lost my dad three years ago.  and i didnt truly get to say good bye.       and i miss him terribly...i'd do anything just to hear his voice again...and so i could tell him i love him.            thank you zach. for such an amazing poem

If its at its worst don't stop believing, because I'm right here and I'm not leaving

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5 posted 07-30-2008 10:28 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

wow, umm for piggish reasons of my own I have been avoiding this poem. but then I saw it up near the frount again and read the last post. Wow, it gave me serious shivers. Thanks for the choice to read this, and thanks for being inspired.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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6 posted 07-30-2008 04:30 PM       View Profile for Octave   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Octave

It was beautiful. I don't even know what to say. It hits right where it hurts.
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7 posted 08-10-2008 11:42 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thank you everyone for your kind words.. and the gratification i feel right now.. I'm glad I choose to write and post here...

~Zach~

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

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8 posted 03-10-2009 09:07 PM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

You have no idea how deeply this poem touched me Zach. I had tears rolling down my face.

There's no comfort to be taken when this happens, there's just us facing the dark alone.

That doesn't mean we must fail.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

LittleWillow
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9 posted 06-11-2009 12:43 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

This is a fantastic poem. Well done.
Its got such a rythm to it..
Having its sad points, but gradually building up hope.

Keeps you going.

Fantastic.
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