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Calling All Angels My Goodbye Note
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Calling All Angels My Goodbye Note |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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So recently due to god-forsaken circumstances i have been foced too move back into m parents house and somehow the person i had become has been lost and i' once again falling victim to my younger brother. _________________________________________ Calling The Angels.. Fractured tears another long goodbye Why is that you can’t hear me cry Your hands at my neck it won’t be long I’m calling all angels to end this song Your so strong so I can’t fight back Your fatal hands have already attacked My breathe restrained in your embrace A bright red blood dripping from my face Its all my fault you continue to say If only I had of stayed away I wrecked your life and I’d love to know how I guess I won’t get to ask if I’m dying now This is my note my long lost plea The words they scream please don’t murder me As tears stream down the sides of my face I’m calling on the angels to end my disgrace Fractured tears another long goodbye I take my last breathe but I don’t cry The bright lights are there to guide me home And on a broken road I’ll walk alone |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
im srry.....but this is one of the best things ever written |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"Fractured tears another long goodbye I take my last breathe but I don’t cry The bright lights are there to guide me home And on a broken road I’ll walk alone." Brilliant... :'( I'm sorry your hurting.. Hope you get better.. ~Zach~ "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion." |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow, you always amaze me. it was immpossible for my socks to stay on this time, but sorry you're hurting. good luck, well, i don't really have any to send your way since i have none myself, but i thought it might be a good thing to say. -Kate "Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?" |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
This is a beautifully written poem, but I wish that it hadn't been born of your misfortune. Hang in there!!! -Andrew There is power in the pen. |
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