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Teen Poetry #8

In This Bind Of Vines

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-07-18 10:23 AM

In This Bind Of Vines

I lay here on the ground,
Trying to break free.
Meanwhile everything is growing tighter,
As this bind of vines slowly suffocates me.
Why did it have to end up this way?
You could have asked me...
And the answer would be sad.
But this punishment is unnecessary.
Could you please help me out of my misery?
You don’t know what I’ve done,
But surely you could forgive me?

As I lay in this bind of vines,
Dying second by second,
My rescuer comes and helps me out,
So I can see another day.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-21 11:55 AM

Nice write Jullianna!... But I thought there was something missing in this poem... hmmm.. Eh i'll figure it out later.. But great poem anyway!

~Zach~

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

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