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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-15 07:39 PM


ten bucks
says you cant
that you dont,
and you wont last
you will break
and i will watch
the clock tick
these seconds away
and i think
your the only thing
thats glued into place

baby i dont see it
could you show me in the light
its dark and i dont know
which way to go

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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2008-07-15 10:23 PM


I really liked this! Going in my library.

Cierra

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KandyGrl511
Member
since 2008-11-30
Posts 52
Michigan
2 posted 2008-12-02 07:20 PM


loved it much!?!?!?!
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
3 posted 2008-12-02 07:39 PM


Really great poem

I love pancakes!!!

I am the arch angel
Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA
4 posted 2008-12-02 10:31 PM


wow man, this is cool, i'm not a big fan of rap music but  if you wrote a couple more verses  i swear you could make a rap..... or maybe im just smoking crack.... who knows
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