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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-07-14 09:43 PM



Pushed Down by the Past

I found what I was searching for
It hid in plain view-sight
In the bottom of my open heart
That holds the darkest light

I shutter quite in loneliness
No tears can be contained
But in this quiet solitude
All thrives upon my pain

I wish that calm white solace
Would come and swallow me
But nothing reaches fingers
That swipe the open sea

But if I asked a moment
Of your precious time
Would I gain your answers
Or a coldness in your eyes

But though you hate my very being
I have some comfort near
And though you spite me no relief
I have a love right here

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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1 posted 2008-07-14 11:14 PM


awww swthrt yooh make me wana cry with this.. cos I remember back to the beg. when you started and how much your poems have changed and your stranghts have grown Kate darling you ROCK!!
Krysti

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2 posted 2008-07-15 12:50 PM


Great poem Kate. It's been along time since i have been to the site. i hope to see more poems from you.

-Elias

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-07-15 09:01 AM


Aww thanks guys, you're so sweet. Thank you thank you.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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