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Teen Poetry #8

Death of the Green

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-07-12 10:38 AM

Death of the Green

Climbing out to freedom
Was never stated well
Until that undone day,
When the human race fell

We stared out of eyes
Filling up with despair
At our ugly brown earth
That, racked, seemed to stare

It had rolled itself under
The now boiling seas
Afraid of the children
Who displayed sick disease

Afraid of the torment
We all had induced
Succumbed to the thought
That we were ones used

So now the green is gone
The barren world stands
We’re all left dieing
This sin on our hands

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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1 posted 2008-07-14 04:20 PM

okay, so it's a little enviornmental, but i still kinda like it, does anybody think anything about it? feed back would be loved to death ahahaha no pun intended.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2008-07-27 10:28 AM

I'm appalled that NOONE commented on your poem. Or maybe it was 'cuz ppl are afraid of sparking a big debate.
Well here goes:
1) I love this poem
2) I love the Earth
3) Going in library

There is power in the pen.

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2008-07-27 10:31 AM

Oops! In my rush to post, I forgot to put it in the library! ^^ (How embarrassing!)

There is power in the pen.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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4 posted 2008-07-27 12:24 PM

don't even worry about it that happens 9 times out of 10 to me hahah jk but it happens to me alot . . .

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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