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Teen Poetry #8
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Idontmindyouundermyskin
Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32
0 posted 2008-07-12 04:24 AM

I’m sorry I never whispered those words
fearing my ears would only catch
the soft breeze as it sailed in the moonlight.
That only an owl high in his mighty nest
would cry to his prey,
taunting him with a sweet lullaby.

I’m sorry I never held on,
fearing my arms would grow tired
carrying the weight of a troubled heart.
That they would fall
and sink in an ocean of tears
never to hold another again.

I thought I feared nothing,
till I imagined my life without you.


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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2008-07-12 10:01 AM

im blown away by this little number here. the last few lines were my favorite but the entire thing was flawless. its really good.
and thanks for hitting up some of my work. means alot. peace out man,
                      CO
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