Wasting Away (whats not to love)

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Teen Poetry #8

Wasting Away (whats not to love)

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-07-11 02:57 PM

just submit
just let them win this time
its not worth the pain
thats written on the signs
they say 60
but were on 80
and i think the brakes are broke

but were not stoping
were hitting this head on
traffic cones and warnings
are lost inside the song
thats playing on the radio
and drowning us in feeling
because every word is ment for us
it almost feels like stealing

wrong turns with no road map
wasting time at the laundry mats
were loving wasting away
thats all there is to say

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-11 06:52 PM

Awe sad but true..

(Library)

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-07-11 07:42 PM

Sad, deep, amazing, hurting, wonderful, unique, understandable. Just a few words to describe it. Library.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

Idontmindyouundermyskin
Junior Member

since 2007-01-29

Posts 32

3 posted 2008-07-12 05:04 AM

Such a simple and amazing piece kid.
Metaphorically it sprouts imagery, which i loved.

Keep up the good writes.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-07-12 12:32 PM

i dont like this poem.

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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