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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal

0 posted 2008-07-09 12:03 PM



Behind the Bars of your Lies


I trusted you, I let you in.
I opened the gates to the secrets within.

And what did you do?

You attacked me from the inside;
Like a spy.
It's like you stole my soul
and tore through my trust.

It tore my heart.

But what's done is done.

And now you're behind bars,
stronger than iron,
more captive than greed.

You're behind the bars of your lies.
And beyond the bars of my life.


7/8/08

© Copyright 2008 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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Come find me?
1 posted 2008-07-09 09:07 PM


"It's like you stole my soul
and tore through my trust."

Good to have you back I really liked this...i can totally relate to it. I'm going through a really tough time right now, and this fits perfectly!!

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
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2 posted 2008-07-09 10:01 PM


Wow. You speak so openly and cleary its hard not to notice. I love this poem, it fits with so many problems people face all the time, including me...great write, library.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
3 posted 2008-07-09 10:09 PM


I completely understand what you mean. Great write.  

     {~~*~~}


"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
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that So Cal
4 posted 2008-07-10 02:11 AM


Thank you all for your kind words. It's encouraging to see others take the time to read one's work. ^_^

There is power in the pen.

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