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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-07-07 12:58 PM


I wish these Words would Leave Me

I thought of you today,
My bloody mind rebelled
I thought it would be different
But those thought all repelled

And I can’t help but wonder
If you ever pause to think
Of all the things you said to me
The things that made me sink

So while you lick your nick-like wounds
My heart must be sewn
The animal that you’ve become
Is on I’ve never known

Did you really mean it?
When you said you’d wished I was
Never in your sight again
That I’d lost your trust

These words can’t be written
The one I wished I’d said
But yours will be replayed
Redone, remeant, reread

Maybe this is what it takes
To let you finally see
That once I was so different
You couldn’t let me be

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2008-07-07 02:04 PM


"Maybe this is what it takes
To let you finally see
That once I was so different
You couldn’t let me be"

I liked this, i can really relate

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
2 posted 2008-07-08 11:42 PM


Guess who? Lol...I'm back. How've you been? Good to see you're still writing. Lol, I've been in a major slump.

Poetry is art.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2008-07-09 09:31 AM


oh me too, i've just barly gotten back up.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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