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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-07-06 10:20 AM


I Think They Call this Love

I dreamt last night that you were here
You held me in your arms
My heart filled full, my pulse beat fast
A captive of your charms

The words that from your lips
Poured into my heart
That never in eternal rounds
Would you, from myself, part

You call me only Beauty
In French I’d be your Bell
The time I have without you, love
Is my own earthly hell

Everything commands me
Attentions drawn to you
Like the universe is saying
“I made him just for you.”

And in my darkest hour
I lightly reminisce
On times we spent together
The ones of purest bliss

But it’s when I hear you speaking
When I look into your eyes
That we were made together
I finally realize




"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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1 posted 2008-07-06 04:01 PM


awwee.. im emailing this poem to my girlfriend, this poem is that good.. Great job!!

Zach

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2008-07-06 04:44 PM


Thanks, glad you liked it i wrote it for a guy i know, that i'm in love with, who loves me (i'm sorry, the word "boyfriend" just doesn't seem to encompass him)

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

BrittanyJ
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3 posted 2008-07-06 05:23 PM


Aw This is sooo sweet!!! I like the title u picked

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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4 posted 2008-07-07 12:37 PM


awww Kate this was such a beautiful poem.! def. one of my new favs by you I love this
Krysti

Earl Robertson
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5 posted 2008-07-07 01:35 PM


Very nice indeed. I'm sending this to the library.

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

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